Here's some constructive criticism that your wrote:
"If you're a little jumpy and words are coming out muffled and fast, control your breathing and think about the words that are coming out of your mouth."
- Rachel Jones
"It was a great speech. So what if you made a mistake? You don't have to mention it. Chances are, no one would've noticed anyway."
- Amichka Francis
"Even though you make nice jokes to keep the audience lively, I personally think you should be serious too. As this is an important time of the year, you should project the words that you're saying well, so everyone can understand what you said. You don't need to rush through. To not show your nervousness, stay still and put your hands behind your back or you can put them on the podium."
- Mallaury Davi
"All of your enthusiasm was great. It kept me listening. But it was kind of distracting when you shook your head back and forth. You should practice standing strait when giving a speech."
- Veliza West
"Very energetic and kept the audience entertained, but remember your giving a formal speech."
- Austin Hassler
"If you're a little jumpy and words are coming out muffled and fast, control your breathing and think about the words that are coming out of your mouth."
- Rachel Jones
"It was a great speech. So what if you made a mistake? You don't have to mention it. Chances are, no one would've noticed anyway."
- Amichka Francis
"Even though you make nice jokes to keep the audience lively, I personally think you should be serious too. As this is an important time of the year, you should project the words that you're saying well, so everyone can understand what you said. You don't need to rush through. To not show your nervousness, stay still and put your hands behind your back or you can put them on the podium."
- Mallaury Davi
"All of your enthusiasm was great. It kept me listening. But it was kind of distracting when you shook your head back and forth. You should practice standing strait when giving a speech."
- Veliza West
"Very energetic and kept the audience entertained, but remember your giving a formal speech."
- Austin Hassler