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You kept the crowd very entertained, and I think this is a very important part. You were a bit awkward and could work a little flow of speaking a little more You kept the crowd going and for that i gave you an A+!!!
Your body language, movements, and flow of speaking need to improve. The way you move your head back and forth seems odd and makes it hard to follow the emotion in your speech. Also, the way you pause in between your statements makes you seem really nervous and takes away from what would be a great, and funny speech. Work on those points and your speeches will greatly improve.
I think that you really captured the audience in your comedy and jokes. However, I felt that if you had slowed down your speech more I would have understood it better. Also, I sensed some nervousness in your speech. Perhaps if you practiced the speech more, you may have come across as more calm and aware of your words. Good Job!
It was a really funny speech and very entertaining especially to a bunch of teenagers!! Next time, just work on your flow of speech and don't be awkward.Just be yourself and organize the points you want to talk about. :-D
You were really funny! I loved your analogies. Remember to take deep breaths. Also, if you speak a little slower that will make your words more clear. Other than that, great job!
Your speech was very entertaining and really gained the attention of your audience. However it would be best to try to make your speech flow a bit more as well as structure your posture better so that it doesn't seem as if you are nervous. Other than that, the speech was enjoyable.
I loved you speech, i thought you were funny and exciting! However you sounded a little bit nervous. Maybe if you practiced your speech more or took deep breaths it wouldn't have sounded that way. But besides that good job!
Your speech was very comical and your voice was clear enough. At the same time, your posture was a tad awkward and your pauses in between were too long. All in all, I enjoyed your speech and wish you best of luck in the future.
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The Sophomore class will be sharing their experiences as they learn about public speaking.